A pricing page that reads like coaching, not a Notion template.
A 1:1 fitness coach with a $1,200 program was getting traffic but no sign-ups. The page had everything: feature lists, three pricing tiers, an FAQ, a contact form. That was the problem. We rebuilt it around the actual transformation. One promise. One proof. One price. One CTA.
What was happening before.
The coach had a perfectly fine pricing page. "Premium Coaching Package." A bullet list of what's included. Three tiers (Bronze, Silver, Gold). A FAQ section about what apps you'd need. A contact form at the bottom asking for goals.
Average session time on the page: 11 seconds. Conversion rate to inquiry: 0.4%. The traffic was right (Instagram + word-of-mouth from gym friends). The page was killing it.
// Approximate snapshot of the original page:
Premium Coaching Package
- Customized workout plans
- Nutrition guidance
- Weekly check-ins
- 24/7 messaging support
- Progress tracking via app
- Habit accountability
- Recipe library access
The rebuild.
Five days. One page. Same offer underneath — rewritten end-to-end so the page reads like the actual coaching experience instead of a feature spec.
Stop guessing.
Train like an athlete.
What we changed and why.
Killed the tier system. Kept the top tier only.
Replaced the feature list with a 4-week timeline.
Hard-coded one piece of social proof above the fold.
Replaced "Choose" buttons with one CTA: "Apply — 2 spots open."
Killed the FAQ. Added a refund line instead.
What the coach got.
Five working days, one designer, one writer (us). Daily Loom updates. Final handover on day 5.
What shipped: a single hosted Framer page (their domain, their account), the copy doc, a spec sheet for the spot-counter widget, and a Resend-powered apply form that pings their inbox + a Slack webhook the moment a new applicant submits.
What we didn't ship: a discovery deck, a strategy session, a brand workshop. The brief was the deck. The page was the deliverable.
Same sprint. Same price. Your page next.
$299 flat. 5 days. We send you a 1-page brief on day one and you say yes/no/edit before any work starts. If you're a coach, course creator, or solo founder with a page that's getting traffic but no buys — this is the cleanest 5 days you'll spend this quarter.